Tuesday 26 December 2017

Letter about traveling to New Zealand

Hi, It is very windy and scary, we are running low on food so I hope we arrive soon. I hope there are no bears or lions in new zealand as we have a short supply of Greenstone. I am running low on ink so I have to stop writing. Hope we arrive soon cause' I am getting sea sick.
Wil

1 comment:

  1. Hi Wil

    It would be a very long and scary trip in a waka on the open sea. Imagine how big the waves would be?
    You would have to ration your food because you would not know how long the journey was going to take.
    Not knowing what you were going to encounter when you arrived in you new country would also be frightening. How do you think you would feel if this was you now?
    I know I would be very sea sick! I would be a nice shade of green in my face after just one day.
    How long do you think the journey would take?

    Good job Wil. Keep up the good work. Remember you can add colour and images to make your posts more interesting if you would like.

    Looking forward to see if you can try this!!

    Until next time

    Allie :)

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Thanks for your helpful, positive, thoughtful comment on my work